I got a bad grade on this paper and my instructor told me to improve it. Can you please add two more pages in accordance to instructions and please NO AI!!!!!!!
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These are the changes I would like to make: Introduction:thesis is clear, but ensure it explicitly outlines the scope of the paper (structural issues vs. public attitudes) and my argument. 2.Each paragraph has claims, but the counterarguments could be elaborated further to strengthen your argument (e.g., mention specific reasons why some groups resist affordable housing projects and rebut those reasons with data).3.The conclusion can summarize your findings more effectively and link back to your research question. It could also suggest more actionable solutions to emphasize a path forward.4.Ensure all your quotes and paraphrases are integrated smoothly and analyzed thoroughly, not just presented. Add your own voice to connect them to your thesis more clearly.
Can you just rewrite this section and add these ideas I got from AI…please rewrite so that they are not ai detectable: Path Forward: What Can Be Done?
Addressing homelessness in New York City requires a comprehensive approach that tackles both systemic barriers and public perceptions. Key recommendations include:
Educational Campaigns: Public awareness initiatives should highlight the structural causes of homelessness, countering stereotypes and fostering empathy.
Example: Media campaigns similar to those by “Housing First” programs in Finland have successfully reshaped public attitudes and reduced homelessness.
Inclusive Policies: Permanent housing solutions should prioritize inclusivity, offering stability without preconditions. Cities like Salt Lake City have demonstrated the effectiveness of this approach.
Resource Allocation: Redirecting funds from temporary fixes to long-term solutions—such as affordable housing development and mental health services—is essential.
Grassroots Advocacy: Community-driven efforts can amplify the voices of marginalized populations and advocate for systemic change. Collaboration between local organizations and policymakers can ensure that proposed solutions address real needs.